
L.O. To generate a variety of sentences for and against evacuating your child.
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SENTENCE
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M |
Connective – VCOP display
Opener – VCOP display |
Connective – VCOP display
Opener – VCOP display |
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S |
Sub. Clause – when, although,
Emb. Clause – comma sandwich
Short (SS) – He ran! |
Sub. Clause – when, although
Emb. Clause – comma sandwich
Short (SS) – He ran! |
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C |
Repetition Q & A Trio (3)
Humour/Suspense J
K |
Repetition Q & A Trio (3)
Humour/Suspense J
K |
Examples from our second class sentence writing challenge:
The mothers kept their children with them despite the heavy bombing.
By Emily and Hannah
Eventually some parents decided to evacuate their children.
By Marcus and Owen
Since World War Two had started, all of the important places in London had been demolished.
By Jay P and Dominic U
In case a poisoned bomb was dropped, which was very lethal, people wore gas masks.
By Alisha, Lauren and Samantha
The mothers, who had lots of jobs, kept their children behind.
By Connor and Kane
Can you write one of the missing sentence types?
October 13, 2008
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October 13, 2008
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The children listened to the spy’s conversation even though they were mortified.
By Kels
Even though it was really dark, Vera and Alf could see.
By Kane
In case Mr Kolenski came back, Vera kept an eye out.
By Emily
Vera, who was tiny, climbed through a window.
By Brandon
They screamed!
By Letitia
They were scared, absolutely petrified!
By Dominic C
They walked, opened the cupboard and found a walkie talkie.
By Hannah
Would the spy see him? Would he get out alive?
By Jay F
The door creaked open…
By Lauren
October 7, 2008
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We are now looking at writing different types of sentences. Visit every day to see who is the ‘Super Sentence Writer’ of the lesson.

October 7, 2008
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February 26, 2008
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February 26, 2008
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February 26, 2008
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February 26, 2008
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February 26, 2008
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As Captain Planet, the superhero, strolled through the corridor he met a young helpful Planeteer.
February 4, 2008
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