Miss Leaman’s Superific Sentence

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Miss Leaman, the Deputy Head at Watcombe Primary, shrieked loudly like a deliriously cheerful parrot because she was unbelievably proud of the work which her perfect pupils were completing.

Can you spot the embedded clause, simile, adverbs, precise nouns, complex noun phrase and the alliteration?

October 25, 2007
Categories: Miss Leaman, Uncategorized . . Author: Miss Leaman

8 Comments

  1. Comment by Abbie G on November 8, 2007 7:38 pm

    Well done miss Leaman you did really good with that sentence

  2. Comment by Abbie G on November 8, 2007 7:40 pm

    Yes I can It is all of it.

  3. Comment by missleaman on November 8, 2007 7:45 pm

    Thanks Abbie. As an incrediskill writer, I reckon that you could write something just as impressive.

  4. Comment by Millie on November 12, 2007 5:12 pm

    well dine miss leaman that sentence is really goood i can fid every thing on it
    SILLY MILLIE(IT SHOULD BE SILLIE MILLIE OR SILLY MILLY) HEHE

  5. Comment by Miss Leaman on November 12, 2007 8:56 pm

    Ah, but just because it has everything in it, does it mean that it is a good sentence?

  6. Comment by missile mike on September 13, 2008 12:32 pm

    hi miss leaman you did a HOT sentance!

  7. Comment by missile mike on September 13, 2008 12:35 pm

    P.S i found all of them except for 2! (because i have not learnt them yet!)

  8. Comment by missile mike on September 13, 2008 12:49 pm

    miss leaman where is my brothers work? p.s loads of messages because im board at my dads house.


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